Delicious Autumn Haiku

Bright crystal rain drops
Thunder, lightening, dark gray clouds
I stop now to breath
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Anonymous said…
Your haiku is lovely, Sioux!
Hope you find a good solution for your back problems soon.
(hugs)
Monday, September 18, 2006 3:54:00 AM
Anonymous said…
Lovely! (deep breath in!)
JTL
xxx
Monday, September 18, 2006 5:49:00 AM
paris parfait said…
Lovely haiku depicting a storm and its aftermath.
Monday, September 18, 2006 7:57:00 AM
Anonymous said…
wonderful! thanks!
Monday, September 18, 2006 12:30:00 PM
jillypoet said…
"Bright crystal raindrops." That is gorgeous! I will think of this the next time I see rain. Thanks!
Monday, September 18, 2006 2:13:00 PM
Anonymous said…
thoughtful and moving...soft, earthy
Monday, September 18, 2006 9:16:00 PM
jzr said…
"I stop now to breathe"

I love this!
Tuesday, September 19, 2006 7:14:00 AM
susanlavonne said…
i love the image of "crystal raindrops"...it's funny how when i read lines like this, i will think of it the next time it rains :-)
Tuesday, September 19, 2006 7:18:00 AM
Jodi said…
Nice haiku. I can really "feel" the autumn reading it.
Tuesday, September 19, 2006 8:02:00 AM
Anonymous said…
nice haiku
I have experienced thunder in Texas, so this is very meaningful to me.
Tuesday, September 19, 2006 10:44:00 AM
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