Sunday, September 17, 2006

Delicious Autumn Haiku

Bright crystal rain drops
Thunder, lightening, dark gray clouds
I stop now to breath

15 comments:

tinker said...

Your haiku is lovely, Sioux!
Hope you find a good solution for your back problems soon.
(hugs)

JourneyThroughLife said...

Lovely! (deep breath in!)
JTL
xxx

paris parfait said...

Lovely haiku depicting a storm and its aftermath.

Jennifer said...

very fresh, love it.

Teri C said...

I love it Sioux!!

Clare said...

The calm in the storm, so lovely.

a rhino walks said...

wonderful! thanks!

jillypoet said...

"Bright crystal raindrops." That is gorgeous! I will think of this the next time I see rain. Thanks!

JaKo said...

Lovely haiku !!!!

louise said...

thoughtful and moving...soft, earthy

jzr said...

"I stop now to breathe"

I love this!

susanlavonne said...

i love the image of "crystal raindrops"...it's funny how when i read lines like this, i will think of it the next time it rains :-)

Jodi said...

Nice haiku. I can really "feel" the autumn reading it.

Sandy said...

nice haiku
I have experienced thunder in Texas, so this is very meaningful to me.

Tammy said...

Wonderful haiku :)

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